Sunday, April 3, 2011

When I Fall In Love

Studying the amaretto sour in front of me, I wondered if my curls had started to wilt with all the dancing I'd been doing at the wedding reception. Suddenly, Alli turned to me and grabbed my arm. Looking meaningfully into my eyes, she said

"Look. Standing next to the cake table. It's Brad."

Sure enough, he stood not twenty feet from me. Hearing his laugh again made me smile. I loved those broad shoulders, and he certainly had nice taste in clothes for a farm boy. Not wanting him to see me stealing a glance in his direction, I suddenly became very interested in the white Christmas lights and ivy on the lattice background across from my table.

I blushed about six shades of red at my memories of him the previous summer at the fair. Tall, sandy haired, his white t-shirt showing off a great tan. He was funny and a huge flirt, really good at taking my mind off the constant stream of negativity in my head thanks to what my ex had put me through. I had been pretty into Brad, but it turned out he was still chasing a girl at Sangamon State. Good guy, though. Too bad it hadn't worked out.

Alli and I went out to the dance floor, and as the bass pumped loudly, I let my mind wander.

"He's a good dancer, he's probably out here too...
.... Good thing I wore my black miniskirt, that can't hurt my chances of getting his attention....
Sure would be nice to talk to him again..."

The DJ announced he was going to play some slow music, and I felt a hand grab mine. I spun to face Brad.

"Hey, it's good to see you. Wanna dance to this one?" he said

"Sure!", I replied, smiling into his deep blue eyes. I had gotten his attention!

"When I Fall In Love" by Celine Dion and Clive Griffin started playing, and Brad started singing along. Listening to his fabulous tenor, confident enough with the words and his ability to sing to be giving me a private serenade... I melted right into his arms. I inhaled deeply as my forehead rested on that spot under his collarbone, closing my eyes. I wanted to freeze that moment in my head forever.

Celine's part started, and although I'm an alto and she's a soprano, I gave it my best shot. I closed my eyes and tried so hard to keep my wavering voice under control.

The dimly lit dancefloor and faint smells of wedding cake and alcohol had suddenly become very romantic. When Brad's part came back in and we were harmonizing as we danced, I think cupid's arrow scored a direct hit.

By the time the last line was sung, I think we had come to an understanding about that chemistry between us.






Have you ever heard a song and suddenly you were swept back to a time in your life you had pushed to the back of your memory?

For many of us a scent or a sound can bring back a rush of remembrances.

This week, your memoir prompt assignment is to think of a sound or a smell the reminds you of something from your past and write a post about that memory. Don't forget to incorporate the sound/smell of your choosing!


(Since my readers like backstory and it might get lost in the comments: I remember this moment with Brad every single time I hear this song. We dated for about 18 months, starting right after this dance.

It remains the only time in my life I was ever spontaneously asked to slow dance, and after my relationship with him, I never sang a duet like this again. It's in my top ten favorite moments ever.

I cut this part out, but I remember this just as clearly: " I peeked around the arm of his dark blue dress shirt at Alli, squeezed my eyes shut and gave a silent squeal of joy. She opened her eyes wide and mouthed back "I KNOW!!" She introduced us the previous summer, and was so excited that he asked me to dance.)

29 comments:

  1. Sighhh you had me at Hello ;)
    I married a man named Brad but he can't sing. I may have married him quicker if he could...definately would have if he were a cowboy ;)
    Well written, I loved the settings.

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  2. Thanks Julie :) I'm glad you came by to read and comment, and I'm glad it made you smile that I wrote about a Brad!

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  3. I agonized over this one. I don't remember setting, I don't remember visual, I don't remember much conversation unless it's something very special or important. The two things I remember with crystal clarity are emotion and music. When I pick a memory to write about, I want to let you into my head and my heart.. but the prompts want me to show instead of tell, and it is really hard for me. I wrote and edited and sought opinion from about a half dozen people to try and give you more SHOW.

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  4. Oh I could feel how close you were dancing. The chemistry. The instant attraction. Very well done. xo

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  5. Totally love this story. It is wonderful!

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  6. I love how this turned out! I wish I'd been more help, but you got some fabulous suggestions, because this really is a great piece! :)

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  7. Oh, how perfect!! Who doesn't know that feeling of dancing to a love song? And you described it so beautifully!

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  8. This is so, so sweet and *such* a clear memory!

    I love that it all revolves around a slow dance and a serenade. And, of course, a serenade.

    I love this part: "that spot under his collarbone" because, I too, adore that space!

    And last, but not least, I really love the backstory that you gave and the interaction between you and Alli that you described. What a fun friend moment!

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  9. I like the smell of cake and alcohol. :) Great scene!

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  10. I'm with Joy! : ) You did a the very nice job with the scene. I could smell your drink and feel the warmth of Brad's neck.

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  11. Tracy: thank you for coming by to read and comment! I'm glad I brought you into that magical space again :)

    Patty Ann: thank you!

    Lizz: your concrit was great and necessary, I appreciate the encouragement and the compliment on the finished product!

    Melissa: thank you for letting me know I captured it well :)

    Galit: I know, right? A serenade. *Swoon*. And yes under his collarbone! That's my favorite place to be, too. Nestling your head just so, feeling securely enveloped, and it just makes the world around you disappear. I'm glad you enjoyed my inclusion of the girly freakout moment with Alli too :)

    Joy: My memory was about a song, but I can imagine being in a wedding reception like this and having that scent send me into nostalgia too. Thanks for noticing that and telling me it resonated with you!

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  12. What a tender memory. Love the backstory at the end too!

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  13. The feelings that this drew up in me was beautiful. :) I would have loved to have been a witness to this evening. :)

    Concrit: Would have loved to have seen more expansion on what happened at the fair - why such strong feelings from then, was it already love back then?

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  14. It's kind of like a scene out of a very romantic movie... your descriptions had me at the wedding reception and watching you on the dance floor. I can understand why this is in your top 10! ;) Love this...

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  15. The details in the beginning of this were fantastic, amaretto sour, your curls, six shades of red, the white Christmas lights and ivy on the lattice work. I felt like I was in that room with you cheering you on.

    I think it very brave that you sang Celine Dion to him! I also really like the fact that the entire story too place in those few moments and that it was a happy ending even if it turns out that it didn't last forever.

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  16. This is pretty wonderful. I wouldn't mind having a scene like this as a memory either!

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  17. Oh I got butterflies in my stomach just reading this! What a beautiful and endearing memory!!

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  18. Loved this. What a beautiful way to begins relationship.

    I thught the description of when you started singing was such an effective metaphor for taking a chance on the relationship, especially in lit of what happened last summer.

    The amaretto sour really helped me imagine the scene.

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  19. What a sweet memory. I used to love amaretto sours. Songs always bring back such memories and I love the way you shared this one, you remembered every moment.

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  20. I felt awkward standing on that dance floor with you, esp since it was very romantic ;) but your writing had me there..swaying, humming along and smiling because I was witness to two people falling in love. Wow!!!

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  21. Wow, what a great memory. I love that you sang to each other, how romantic. I think you wrote this very well, I could picture the wedding reception. My most memorable wedding reception dancing moment was not so sweet--my partner in the wedding party (who was married) got a little too friendly during our dance. I couldn't wait for it to be over!

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  22. Love your memory. Thanks for stopping by and your memoru comment. I love those smells as well

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  23. That's a fantastic memory - and you made me feel like I was living it!

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  24. I like your inner dialogue with yourself: "thank God I wore the black mini-skirt..."

    I also smiled at the Amaretto sour. In my youth, I drank those, too. It's a drink for the young, don't you think?

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  25. I love the description of the dance. It's so well done.
    Putting the backstory afterwards is genius. It fills in without taking away from the "moment" you were describing.

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  26. Your descriptions are so spot-on, from the way you were feeling, to the way he looked all tan in his white t-shirt (and is there a better look for a guy?)

    When you are the 80-year-old couple on the dance floor, you can request this song. Sigh.

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  27. Love, love, love! My favorite: "... I melted right into his arms. I inhaled deeply as my forehead rested on that spot under his collarbone, closing my eyes."
    Such a tender moment. I strikes the emotional place in me that remembers that type of moment in my own life.

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  28. I totally feel the emotion in this - hope, excitement, butterflies, and the adrenaline that kicks in when you feel something starting. Love it. The part about you singing together is just...beautiful.

    And I'm so glad that you put a note at the end about what happened with him because I was dying to know.

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  29. Very tender piece- I love that you were spun around to dance...what a charmer!

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